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from four seasons
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from four seasons |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
from four seasons winter's day blurs the night with its coldly freeze and its blending grays and its voiceless snow spring's day bares the babes with its peekly greens and its blooming lays and its deathless grow summer's day frees the kids with its sunly screens and its swimming ways and its boisterous glow autumn's day paints the woods with its brushly clean and its freshening rays and its drabless flow my day feels them all with my boldly scenes and my scribbling plays and my thoughtless know i come from four seasons m.a. miller 11.10.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Good day, I love this and the font colours for the seasons. The indentations are very effective too. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me too! Well done! jwesley |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ This is very effectively done. The blending of the words - into the colors - into the seasons is most appealing. I sure hope more get to take a peek at this beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
MA~ really beautiful, the way you structured this! loved the blending of the colors to go with each season. wonderful! take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mark... this is very well done .... excellent imagery and use of descriptive metaphor also enjoyed the unique rhyme scheme ... the repetative pattern carried down from verse to verse. the colors were an added bonus very cool take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It sure is good having you back Mark...and with such a spectacular display of beauty |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MA~ you did a beautiful job with this.......loved the presentation as well as the poem! I liked the fall best.......  -SEA |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
This is really great. I love the color comparison with the seasonal rhymes. Very nice. I really enjoyed it! --Cassandra |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
hello again ... thanks to all for reading ... this was a fun piece to compose and "design", but didn't want the colors to detract from the intended meaning ... they needed to enhance and reflect the content ... this blasted blue background plays havoc with some colors though ... thanks again for reading ... |
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