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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-12-19 04:23 PM

Look Marsha I figured it out... I think .

Dusk comes with soft tread
bringing thoughts of dread
Can dreams rise instead?

By stars candlelight
Awakening in fright
What closed in the night?

In the early morn
I'm awake forlorn
Who rides with the dawn?

and just for the practice one that doesn't rhyme

In the midst of night
feeling sorrow's lure
Who seeks tomorrow?

Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-19 04:34 PM

Kethry~

I think these are great!!

-SEA

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2000-12-19 04:48 PM

So do I, good job

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-12-19 04:52 PM

SEA and Pepper,
I'm not sure they are what what Whykus are supposed to be. I'm no good at following instructions.

Thanks for responding.
Kethry

Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-12-19 05:01 PM

Kethry~ sometimes rules don't matter!!

-SEA

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-12-20 08:31 AM

Thanks SEA,
Maybe I'll check with Nan though she knows about these things.
be well
Kethry

Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-12-20 11:12 AM

i enjoyed reading them, especially the first one

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2000-12-20 01:26 PM

Kethry love, I knew you would, and yours are so much better than mine were. (I found them hard work dear heart and you know how much I detest anything that takes too much effort) You know exactly what I was going to say then, I can see you smiling from here.

These are absolutely fabulous love they really are
Wondeful work

Take care
Slushy Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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