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Open Poetry #12

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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-01-11 07:32 PM

Rolling waves of orange die
Distinguished in a blackened calm
Glowing sparks ignite your eyes
Sooth you like a Sunday psalm
Golden glow on windowsills
Moonlit smiles peering through
Heart and room the moonlight fills
When it shines to show me you

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-11 07:40 PM

OHhhhhhhh, I really like this

-SEA

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-11 07:47 PM

Terrific Kevin...loved it..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-01-11 07:52 PM

I love the flow of this. Wonderful write.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 2001-01-12 09:53 AM

Thanks guys,
I had fun with this one....
trying to work on my imagry

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-01-12 09:59 AM

kevin,
this was outstanding! really liked
the imagery you used here. brought a
smile to my face. keep em coming!

take care.
amy

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-01-12 12:52 PM

loved it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-01-12 12:58 PM

How can you call enjoyment such as this "work?" Well done!

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