Syncopated Brazilia---from a summer concert in the park

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Open Poetry #12

Syncopated Brazilia---from a summer concert in the park

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-22 11:52 PM

Syncopated Brazilia
Virginia Salter

syncopated rhythm
in a rumba feel
toe tappin’
shoulder rappin’
swing ‘n’ sway
your hips away

cheek to cheek
take a peek
one, two, hip, shoe
green grass sky blue
how I wanna
dance with you

sun glints
off cymbal’s chime
rhythm sway
the summer time
Latin lovers
on your feet
shift and roll
the rumba beat

© August 26. 2000

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

1 posted 2001-02-23 01:57 PM

VAS, this was alot of fun to read, makes you kind of wanna dance.

Parker

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-02-23 05:04 PM

a pleasure to read!
Fun and enjoyable!

~*Peachy Be*~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-23 06:51 PM

Good, Haleyja, that's what I was going for. The music had be rockin' to the beat and the poem just transpired.

Thanks Voiceless, glad you enjoyed, too.

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