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Open Poetry #12

Temptress (cinquain)

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-03-05 11:42 PM

Aching
Explore desire
Unknown before, tempt me
Beyond a crossed line between two
Temptress

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 03-05-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-06 09:23 AM

ohhh, I like this very much!

SEA

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2001-03-06 06:15 PM

thank you, I'm glad you did.

Snow

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

3 posted 2001-03-06 10:10 PM

tempt me.. mmmhmmm, I like that!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-03-07 01:18 PM

Snow--I like this muchly...well done.

PM

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2001-03-07 06:53 PM

wolf... you.. you.. *sigh*

PM... I'm glad you liked this one ;-) thank you!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-03-08 03:36 PM

Very nice!

Has Tempress seen this, I wonder?

Corinne

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-03-08 08:31 PM

i love cinquains and this is a fine example of why i love this form...

succinct yet explores lots...i esp liked your fourth line

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