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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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lucky, lucky sun, it's true, not even once did he see me or read between line misconstrued and grasp a poet's poetry... lucky moon in silver'd shine, not once did she forsake her crown, for all my yearning, deemed divine, Luna hears my silent sound. Lucky wind, in air fly free, a cleansing of my soul enwrapped-- myself- my eyes in nudity complete--deplete within a grasp. Lucky ground to be so still as the earth so subtly turns... Lucky me, to feel the till of breaking ground so newly burned. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes.......this is a keeper. And you should submit it. I don't care where, just do it!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lucky lucky lucky me ... for I get to read thy poetry like stars and moon and sun that shine I dance in poetic rain of thy rhyme divine lucky lucky lucky me ... to read thy gifts from pen of serenity  hey me twin...plant me a butterfly bush in your garden this year ... and dont forget the raspberries *winkiewinkie* Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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