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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 10:04 PM

We were once together
Together fighting off the rages
this world threw at us
We were happy and all was well
Then I ran
I ran from you
From the comfort of your arms
From your tender lips
I was filled with the fear that had attacked me as I had slept
I ran to the ends of the earth
Into the comfort of my own shadow
And when I had realized I couldn’t live in this hellish world without you
And returned
To beg for your forgiveness
But you had found another
Someone to replace me
And to help you stand up to the storms
And I was alone
I died that day
Unable to fight the world alone
Through no ones fault but my own
I should have never left you

"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist
"Optimi consiliarii mortui"-learn from the past
"Otia dant vitia"-the devil finds work for idle hands

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-26 10:13 PM

This was quite sad. Good poem though, and I hope things improve for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2001-03-26 11:49 PM

Now maybe, i understand why you choose your name...

Well, chin up tiger! Life is like poker (Not strip poker, mind you!), it all changes at the pull of an ace. With only 52 cards in a deck, figure...wait...nevermind. Anyway, i'm trying to say, hang in there...man, the men in the white coats were right!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-03-26 11:51 PM

it was much sad...
but nice job keep writin

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-03-27 03:33 AM

hey this is great. don't worry everything will get better!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-03-28 04:53 PM

Great poem.. But remember, in the end things always get better.

Stay strong.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-07 09:12 PM

Sorry to see you're in such a situation. Hope things are better for you now.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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