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starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
*Sometimes* Sometimes my mind is just an empty room. With nothing left for me to consume. and in the end it all seemed worse. that i just want to hollar and curse. Sometimes my soul is just an empty field. Lying there just waiting to be healed. I don't know how to stop this misery, Life isn't all its cut out to be. <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you." [This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You're right.....but then again, sometimes it is. I liked this poem. well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very true in my own opinion. great job on the poem! and keep sharing and writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
"Hey...tell me what you think of my poems. Don't be too harsh, I already know their not the best." Don't hide your ablity behind such self-degrading statements. I won't tell if you don't...hehe  WAIT! Opps, i guess the secret's out. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
lol who r u talkin 2 ???? dont worry bout him as i said the poem is still great  well then.. can u reply 2 my poems...hehe i'm jus playin but deranger y u gotta say that here? ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
great poem i feel the same way at times but i also feel that life can be a great journey depending on how you live it keep up the goods stuff |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah don't mind Al and Deranger... they're weirdoes...  I liked this poem, it was pretty good. I'm with Javier, sometimes they are. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice poem, starry. I really liked the emotion you put into this piece. *hugs* I hope you don't feel this way all the time. Keep writing great poetry.. it helps. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this was deep, keep writing, ab *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Life is what it actually is...HARD Fighting thru it is what makes us a better person so, keep fighting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
dorks *points* there over there.  nice reply hun i agree! i liked this one very muchs. thanx for sharin tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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