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Dust and bones |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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I rode down into the valley As I stood there and stared Out into the vast open plain I noticed.... I noticed that there were no flowers No tiny blossoms. No tiny Buds Tumble weeds rolled across the dust. Tumble weeds... Flowers long past which have died and dried. All bundled up in an impromptu collaboration Collaboration of disunity. No Flowers No flowers just remnants of things far gone Dust and Bones Nonexistent smiles of joy and happiness Just Dust and Bones |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow....i think that this is my most favourite poem by you thus far..  it was really powerful with its images...of dust and bones contrasted with the flowers and buds. great poem- very well written..i loved it! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was very good, Sarah! Very good! Oh man I really like this one, probably one of your best. Kudos on the title! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job sarah...  i liked this as it was different from ur previous works. ..but still and again an awesome poem!!!!!! ..keep writng..cya   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow!!!! Sarah this was great! I really really liked the whole poem. Amazing job on this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Sarah! This has to be one of your best. Very, very/b> nice job! I liked this a whole lot. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jeez, Sarah. This is fantastic! I don't know how I missed this one. Dust and bones is a great title name for this piece. Well done!  ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
since everything else was said.....awesome job sarah   I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park [This message has been edited by Love's Addiction (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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