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Teen Poetry #4

A Thousand Roses

Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 2000-07-15

Posts 60

0 posted 2001-05-02 08:43 PM

Love like a thousand roses are the reason to live for (i thought),
but like the pedals it just goes by.
Sought then I thought to have a thousand roses for myself, I treated them good, but when the fall came they all died and with each pedal of love that fell I cried for the love I had lost again, but you the one of those thousand roses survived to give me the nectar I needed to live on, because without you i rather die than to live without love.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-02 09:17 PM

Well done! I completely agree with what you've written. SImply beautiful. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-05-03 07:23 AM

Nice job...

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-05-03 01:56 PM

I enjoyed this.
Nice work.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 2000-07-15

Posts 60

4 posted 2001-05-03 05:35 PM

well I apreciate that you have enjoyed this thanx a lot!

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