Teen Poetry #4 |
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My Extra Specials Special Pen!! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i freaked when i thought that id lost it i searched high and low for forever i breathed when i saw where it was i smiled when i realized id put it there umm this is about the pen that i use to write all me stuffs....id temporarily lost it...but i found it this mornin...so woo hoo for me!! ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me I want to hear you say "Well done" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
haha this is cute! *L* i do this to everything, i put it someplace and think "oh i'll remember i put it there" but never do. ![]() Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really didn't like this much. It seems so not up to your potential tiff. You can do so much better. But I love ya *hugs* ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Oh this was really cute!! I'm glad that you found your special pen, but what makes it so special?? LOL. ![]() ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i didn't particularly care for this, i just found it to be lacking any real substance and not anything close to the beautiful poetry you are capable of writing. not trying to be mean, i just think that ou are amazingly talented and capable of better. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was cute...but me i be losing pens always...so i go to buy new ones then buy again and i lose it then buy it...then find one of my old pens...then lose that old pen leaving me to find the new one...and it goes on...like that ![]() ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this poem was so cute ![]() ![]() |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Well damn. I read a poem and smiled. That hasn't happened in a while. For some reason I need to put this in my library. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†< |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
lol, that's really cute. I likes ![]() STace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
hehe wat a funky lil poem like it lots :} ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i know exactly how you feel!!..i dont have a pencil case...never had one...and could never use one for more then two days...haha....but what i always did was keep one pen with me for like the whole year...and id be so sad when it ran out....awwwww...and i always lose lids...me and pen lids just dont mix i suppose..hehehe...cute poem...nice to see ppl are writing about sum of the quirkss of life too..hehehe...youve just inspired me to post up a stupid poem of mine..hehe..it is really very stupid...but ill share it.. OH not that im saying this ones stupid...its light hearted ..so im going to put....erm..you get my drift right?...*sighs*..ill put it up after i get sum time out...hehehe... ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl...too cute... ![]() ![]() |
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