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don't make me tell the truth (lyrics)
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don't make me tell the truth (lyrics) |
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Heaven New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 8 |
Chorus: Don't make me tell the truth The truth will make you leave Just let me lie Lie to you and me I can't face the fact That I hurt you so So don't make me say it Don't make me let you go Verse 1: It was a dark and stormy night In late July I was wollowing in sadness Just about to cry Then there he was a tall dark shadow He held me for comfort and I couldn't say no You know the rest Don't make me say it Just let me lie I just can't take it You know I love you And I always will Say something Don't stand so still Verse 2: Please Baby talk to me Don't look at me that way I didn't want to say it I wanted you to stay Please dont' be mad I know it wasn't right and I'll forever regret What happened that night I love you babe Please believe me I would jus die If you leave me Don't say that babe It was an....Accident Love is a tragedy |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this seemed more of a...song then a poem  .hehe...but hey!...this was very nicely written...i really liked the emotions in the lyrics...and hope to see more...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yeah...did seem more like a song...but i guess, that word, "lyrics" in the title would maybe add some songical overtones? Hmm? Heh. This was good. Almost got me wishing someone else beside you wrote it and it was true...ah, my bane is reality...Anywho, cool cool. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea..lyrics means it's a song.....c'mon albert..thik! haha. Well done on this one. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Just because the word lyrics is in the title doesn't mean it's a song. It could be a...a...umm...nevermind. You've expressed yourself well. Well done. ~AF~ "I'm not a slave to a God that doesn't exist." |
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Heaven New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 8 |
Yes it is a song. but i'm not talented enough to put music to it. that is what i do best is write the lyrics. well thank you for reading it heaven Love is a tragedy |
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