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Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

0 posted 2001-06-08 10:43 PM

Hi I'm a new member to all this and just want to know what you think about this poem. Thanks

You Never Knew

I've wanted you to be mine
This is what I longed for all the time
Words could not describe your beauty
But this you never knew

I am your friend
But through Christ your brother
Though I wish and pray
That maybe someday
I could be something other
This you never knew

-Nicholas-

Evylyn
Junior Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 20
Florida, USA

1 posted 2001-06-08 11:21 PM

Oh, this is so touching, Nicholas! It was very short, but extra sweet. I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

*Moves out of the way so more people may comment on such a piece* ;o}

"The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself."

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

2 posted 2001-06-08 11:59 PM

yeh, this one spoke to me cause yeah, i know what its like to want more from a relationship than friendship... even when God seems to be saying no.

sucks, but He knows best

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-06-09 01:10 AM

Welcome To passions!

What a sweet piece!! I really enjoyed it...welcome!!!

P.S.- Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

4 posted 2001-06-09 02:01 AM

Hola! Welcome to Passions, and that's a nice poem

Although it sucks to be in that situation :p

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-09 02:31 AM

first of all...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...and on the poem it was nice and sweet...you should let this person know

...good luck and se you around...bye Nicholas

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

6 posted 2001-06-09 03:48 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!! (with open arms!!) What a wonderful expression of feelings. I'm sorry that you have to be in this situation though it's not a good situation to be in. But it's a wonderful way to say the things that you just can't seem to "say"!

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

7 posted 2001-06-09 12:49 PM

Welcome to passion!

This was a great first post. Friends will be around longer that boyfriends and girlfriends.

Regina

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

8 posted 2001-06-09 01:03 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

ya know what i think..i think you should tell him/or her...so they know!!!

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-06-10 12:46 PM

This was really great.....I enjoyed this a lot!
Welcome to Passions!!!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-10 12:54 PM

Wilkommen zu Passions

Awww. This hit me hard because I went through that too(I guess I'm not the only teenager with problems

)
Sweet, never give up until the restraining order is up to 100ft! jking

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

11 posted 2001-06-10 01:04 AM

I just want to thank you guys for the replies and the really warm welcome to passions.

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

12 posted 2001-06-10 01:06 AM

I just want to thank you guys for the replies and the really warm welcome to passions.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

13 posted 2001-06-16 03:11 PM

Welcome to Passions, Nick!
Very nicely written first post. I enjoyed the read... it's very honest. Good luck in this situation. Keep sharing all your work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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