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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-06-14 02:18 PM

although my life may be full of bliss
I dont know how to explain this
could we just start...
with one kiss
for me to have a place in your heart
what will it take
for us to make
the perfect life
so will you be my wife
till death do us part
will i still have a place in your heart
so can we just start
with one simple kiss

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-06-14 02:26 PM

Very Nice. This is my first I've read from you. Groovy

Nice Flow

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

2 posted 2001-06-14 02:27 PM

I like this one. Really cute, keep writing!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

3 posted 2001-06-14 02:29 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

it's just so sweet!

I need tissues!!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Pickleweasel
New Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 7
AL

4 posted 2001-06-14 02:52 PM

Hey that was a really good poem. I liked it.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-06-14 07:02 PM

I like this immensly. Very good indeed. Really cute as well!!

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-06-14 10:53 PM

sweet poem...girls must love this

...haha..great job!...bye jeffs liol brotehr

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

7 posted 2001-06-15 09:42 AM

this is the first i've read from u and i liked it great job!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-06-16 03:07 AM

Sweet poem here corey. I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-06-19 12:22 PM

One simple action can change the course of a humans life...ahhh to kiss or not to kiss...that is thy question...

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