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Teen Poetry #4

Evermore Do I Dream

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
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0 posted 2001-06-14 04:03 PM

“Evermore Do I Dream”

Evermore do I dream
Of those once belated scenes
Shrouded by the mists of time

Gathered up
I can move no more
Halted by these visions

Without cause I cannot fight
I pray for you to see me through this night
So that I may endure another day of suffering

Atoning for my sins
Which are yet to be known
Hoping for love, where indifference is shown

But these things I cannot help
From this path I cannot turn
Because it’s for you that my heart does yearn

Over time this feeling grows
Groping through the shadows for you hand to hold
While I dream sweet woeful dreams of you forever more

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-14 05:13 PM

"While I dream sweet woeful dreams of you forever more"

I like this line best.....very cool

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-14 06:01 PM

beautiful poem...word choices were great...i liked this one a lot

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-14 09:27 PM

Another great one. I really enjoy reading your work.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-16 02:47 AM

Great job here! I enjoyed this one, although it wasn't my fav by you. Still, it was a good read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
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5 posted 2001-06-16 01:58 PM

Thank you all for your replies

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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