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Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-02-19 08:32 PM

"Tick", "tick", "tick".
I watch the hand pass by the six.
Been sitting here calming while time flys by.
Sitting here silently not making a sound,
wondering when my turn will come around.
Sitting here, sitting here doing nothing.
Oh dear Lord I wish there were someing.
Something to do,
Something to say,
Someone to talk to while time floats away.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-02-19 10:23 PM

I liked this one a lot.......Sometimes i feel like this too....in fact i feel like that now. i really connected with this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-19 10:59 PM

Yeah, this is why I spend so much time in Passions.

*dodges tomatoes*
I'm kidding!
Great poem, girl.

-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-02-19 11:05 PM

I liked this one alot... good use of words.

It's a smart poem, if a poem could be smart? LOL

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-20 07:18 PM

when i'm in this situation, i call it "boredom"

i'm liking this poem a lot
thanks for sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

5 posted 2001-02-20 07:46 PM

It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right...I hope you've had the time of your life....OK so yeah. Grrrrreat poem.

~Carly

"Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

6 posted 2001-02-20 08:29 PM

I like it I like it

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

7 posted 2001-02-20 09:36 PM

hah, that graphic did it all... very good poem, i love these types

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

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