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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
To live this life, with all its pain. nothing from it, shall I gain! The only joy, is knowing it will end. waiting for great fireballs, our god will send! I live this life, with hope to die. for nomore, am I shy. My words are bitter, my world is dark. you have no idea, what love will spark. To lose, and let lost. now and forever, I pay that cost! My mind shrouded, my heart almost dead. atleast I know, that she was fed. Now its time to wait, for the next move I make. trying to make it obvious, my soul you may take. |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
From the depths of sorrow, grows a new tommorrow--really, it can happen!! Good read, but hang in there, black can turn to color, in a blink of an eye. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
"Maybe when the door of happiness closes, another opens, but often times we look so long at the closed door that we don't see the one which has been opened for us." Keep your faith, there's something *good* out there  Mags The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes it seems like we get more than our fair share of pain...but I think everything comes to us if we embrace it...James |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
You'll feel like this until you find something (or someone) that empowers you so much that the only reason you get up every morning is to hope to see them. You'll start to feel the anger (or whatever) leak out of you for a little while (atleast) and it'll be okay again. Eventually though, it'll all come back, and you just have to wait it out. Never do anything you're gonna regret. Life goes in cycles. I'm crazy, I know, but it's true. Good read though!  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
"Hide not your talents, they for use were made. What's a sundial in the shade?" I loved this, but this is not worth dwelling over, get out & make new memories, if u hide u will miss out on great opportunities (trust me i know)It gets better i promise!  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm very sad... very dark... I hope this all gets better for you. Nice write. Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Deep words... the format was awesome! Your words spoke to me as if I had writen them myself. Great write!~Jess |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
OOOO I am going through a stage where I can't stand sappy love poems.. this is a big crock of bull!!!! Bad experiences!!! causes me to write this poo! |
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