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The Deal |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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I made a deal with Lucifer, a deal I have come to regret. Your heart in exchange for my soul, I gave too much to pay the debt. When the time came to give you all I had no idea where to start. As my soul belongs to him now I could only offer my heart. Your love alone can rescue me, the only weapon I have found that can take on the souls of hell and bring me back what I once owned. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is powerful & I can really feel your words  LOVE ELMO |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
My mood is a bit dark at the moment so I am glad you liked it Elmo. Dee |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Hi Dee! I walked this one around in my mind for a while and I enjoyed the read. I think it always belongs to you my friend, just some times you have to go out and reclaim it! Take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Eddie, for your positive comments. I guess its time to set off and reclaim my soul then.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Forgot to put this in my library for copyright reasons.  |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Dee... Wow... This is great. Dark, but great! I really love it. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Bec, thanks darlin'.  Me x I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
awesome write dee.. if you still have your heart to give, my friend, you have not lost all..and regaining said soul will be victorious if you fight the damned with a strong heart... much enjoyed hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
g, thanks for stopping in. Your thoughts are always welcome under my poems. Dee |
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