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Dark Poetry #3

pain

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2001-10-08 09:55 AM

PAIN:

All you said
You lied

All you promised
Denied

All the pain
Replied

All your love
Died

All I can say: paaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-08 12:27 PM

I'm sorry you are hurting, I hope you are ok

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-10-08 08:14 PM

Awww.... *hugs*

I love the way this was written, tho...

~Tier

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2001-10-20 09:49 PM

This is short, but the whole idea is there & i can relate to every word--great works

LOVE ELMO

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-10-20 10:42 PM

"all the pain/replied"

awwwwwwww..*hugs*...i do hope youre feeling better sylvia

. it does get better you know. i loved the format you wrote this in- very original. it served its purpose well- good job on the poem.
thanks for sharing

see the glass crack like a flower opening

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-10-22 07:20 PM

Oh my, so sorry you must endure this. I surely do know the feeling all too well.
Take care
Sandra

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