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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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BITTER IRONY I may look 12, but I'm more like 30. I make love, but just feel dirty. I seek pleasure, but find pain. I love the sunshine, but see only rain. I long for friendship, but stand alone. I wander away, but end up in the same home. I search for the rainbow, but there's just black. I strive for completeness, but everything I lack. My glass remains empty, probably has a hole. My heart is broken, I'm missing my soul. I walk so fast, but get further away. I know the right words, but the opposite I say. Am I trying too hard? Thinking too much? Keep drawing the wrong cards. In much of a rush? LOVE ELMO  [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"My glass remains empty, probably has a hole. My heart is broken, I'm missing my soul" awwww..*hugs Katie*, this is a rather sad poem from you. im sure many ppl have felt like this at one point or another. im glad you shared this, you expressed yourself well. i enjoyed this very much. see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
Hey, I thought this was just wonderful. I know it's a sad piece but I really like the way it's written. Good job. JT |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx for the replies cherish & JT--just some random thoughts LOVE ELMO |
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