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Dark Poetry #3
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Jonas
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0 posted 2002-05-01 02:29 AM

The hole gets deeper
as another handful of me
is scooped out,
tossed onto a pile
which grows higher each day;
I marvel at my existence,
still here -
even when so much of me
has been taken away.

© 4/30/2002

Life is what you.....hey!  These aren't my pants!
© Copyright 2002 Gary - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2002-05-02 08:14 AM

Gary~

I know it exactly how this feels....what a haunting expression....very nicely done sir...Peace

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~
Jonas
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Oregon
2 posted 2002-05-03 11:48 PM

Thank you Lauren. I like to turn off the lights and enjoy the dark once in awhile

Life is what you.....hey!  These aren't my pants!
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