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Dark Poetry #3

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Neala
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since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-05-01 03:32 PM

I have tears rolling down my face
You put me in this place
Where knowone can survive
I let you tear me down
Right into the ground

As I lay here cold
In my blood
I realize you made this
And this place
Which I have wanted

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

1 posted 2002-05-01 08:20 PM

that was a great poem
what place do you mean, that this person put you in?

[This message has been edited by Jose Marti (05-01-2002 08:29 PM).]

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

2 posted 2002-05-04 12:26 PM

This Poem was beautiful, I share your pain, and hear your cries. Keep your head up.
LadyPeach1

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-05-05 03:33 PM

Well what I ment is a little weird I have health problems and when I get to upset I start to cough sometimes to the point there is blood. So I was blaming him for making me sick.

-Neala
Goddess of Sadness

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