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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Clear blue hands of water A heart they try to clasp Love's fleeting breath exhaling Hope bubbles through their grasp your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
"Love's fleeting breath exhaling." I so wish I could write like this. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow! Great use of imagery for this one ... These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
If those hands trying to clasp the heart were truly clear, then we'd both (and all) be living a glorious life of immortal bliss. The smallest of "heart of the rose" statements. I loved it. I've lived it. Thanks!`! [This message has been edited by Purity (06-25-2002 04:10 AM).] |
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