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revelations from ham |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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Gray hands greet my shoulders. Cold lips reach for my face. "Come in" a spidery voice snares my heart, entangling child memories and adult vision. What is this feeling? At what point did Death decide to steal their faces and parade around in this house I know so well? It was problably when I was busy. You know, important stuff. I peer at the bastard. Letting him know... ... I see you... Death regards me, amused. "Don't worry, dear... here... have some more ham." A smile etched for 81 years exposed my folly. This haunted mask, that I would someday wear, was only a reminder for those of us too busy. You know... important stuff. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
this is very very good so good i wish it were mine congratulations ps have a look at my old man by the fire there is a link arthur |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very impressed. A belated welcome to "Dark" Great write on a subject near and dear to my heart. Ham! ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sorry, Dude You seemed to have dropped this, way back there -> ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 It's getting to the point where I look forward to yr posts each day, brian.Heh heh. Loved this, even in its strange sadness/inevitability. Said if I only could ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
P.S., for something of a familiar feel (food wise, anyway), check out Waking up in sanctuary. Shhh ... don't tell anyone! Said if I only could ... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks graverobber wranx you might be disappointed sometimes squirrel but thanks bS |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I peer at the bastard. Letting him know... ... I see you... Death regards me, amused. "Don't worry, dear... here... have some more ham."" madviking genius... |
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