Dark Poetry #3 |
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Going Nuts! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest ![]() |
I am desperately infatuated "In love", I claim? My breath is all but gone You have taken me captive in your SEDUCTIVE web Nothing left for me to do but let you suck the life out of me I see your plan is different than mine at least, I think so?? Where from here? I feel only doom Only a dark forboding gloom So I sit in fear With a burning tear crying for *YOU* Chase away my stormy blue That is what I live for now To "love" only YOU And YOU love only ME But that will NEVER be A TRUE REALITY! Please do what you will do But, do "IT" quickly For God's sake Do "IT", before I self destruct Leave my dignity behind And beg out of my mind! In a state of Going nuts! [This message has been edited by Scarlet Lady (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I know this one...only a time or two...and then you give in or give up... Good poem! Made me remember what IT feels like. Thanx!! Click |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well written. I felt the craziness within the poem. Sorry you're going through this...... ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
I loved this it was very real and soooooo true..i hate it when feelings aren't mutual..good luck! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Thanks all for the kind words! And craziness is an understatement of how I felt while writing this one! ARGHHHHHHHH!!!! I hate it when that happens! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Loved the title! ( I feel NUTS today!!) LOL The poem was great too. I also have been there and felt that. It passes in time, well it did for me! ![]() Good luck to you, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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