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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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You've now seen the dark that's stricken me the beast that steals my right to be the demon that lives within my head my state of never-ending dread this haunting that lives within my space this specter that I cannot erase so free yourself from who I am get away from here while you still can he's neither controlled nor caged you see so please take flight, just turn and flee. WhiteRose |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I thoroughly liked the elevation of demon living inside your head turned haunting that lives within your space. Flowed nicely, and nicely done |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 If this is what the demon's doing to you WR, congratulate her for having such great taste in poetry.  Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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