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my prism
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my prism |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
I stare at the prism of memories A ray of light enters A ray of hope Emotions refract in colors From the blue of sadness The red of anger Yellow of blind love To the green of distrust Mixing into a thin line of black mood Exiting Pinpointing Laser like Burning a hole Through my defenseless heart lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Burning a hole, through my defensless heart...This last line really got me  Loved this one*S* Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very nice choice of words here Loved every last line! Mags |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
i really enjoyed reading this great use of wording and wonderful last line  |
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