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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2002-08-26 04:49 AM

Shinning Steel

My tears;
Shards of ice.
Bitter cold
Mingles with,
The warmth
Of my blood.

Ever flowing
Icy-warm rivers
Over milky skin.
Wandering streams;
Staining all with
Unforgiving fingers

Shinning steel;
Grinning off moonlight.
Blanketed with
Grieving blood and
Mocking tears.
Creator of scars.

© Copyright 2002 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-26 09:08 AM

Welcome to the Dark, lots of concise vivid images to partake of here. I do look forward to seeing more!

Zall
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since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

2 posted 2002-08-26 09:45 AM

Its got heart, I like it

bsquirrel

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-26 02:57 PM

I like this, but please tell me it's not about cutting.

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2002-09-04 01:14 PM

opposites attract. great mix of them in this piece. enjoyed!

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2002-09-04 01:53 PM

hrm...interesting..alot of vivid images come to mind hopefully its only my imagination flirting with my senses and is not reality...

Kristen

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