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Dark Poetry #3

from myself tonight.

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

0 posted 2002-10-11 10:20 AM

it'sfridayandforsomereason
idon'twantittobe
itcouldbethefactthat
maybei'llbealoneand
thinkingbutifyoucouldonly
beme,ifonlyoucouldholdme
andthosevoicesareatitagain
andi'mjustacrippledhuman
tryingtounderstandwhy
hewantstobemyromeo
andi'mstartingtobetheone
whowantstokillboth
romeoandjulietandstopthis
nothingthatwillhappen
andnoangelsaresingingtoday
nofairy'splaying
hideandseekwillbe
mygame,ineedtorun
needtobefree
needtobesavedfrom
mysefltonight.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-10-11 11:14 AM

clumsy --
liked the way
the format
echoed
those
incessant
demanding
voices

I like different
I like this
welcome to Dark

brian

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

2 posted 2002-10-11 12:32 PM

thank you

Amaranthine
Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 61
ON Canada

3 posted 2002-10-11 01:00 PM

'andi'mstartingtobetheone
whowantstokillboth
romeoandjulietandstopthis'

That part right there almost made me cry.
You bastard!!

Well done!

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