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Crumble into someone |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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He crumbled into her. Those two likewise, into two others. They four into their own four. Until we were all dust. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
We all are eventually dust... I liked this. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
M....This is great ...I like this alot. Enjoyed much. H. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
not sure I totally get it, but I do love that first line  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I was in a sour mood yesterday. Thanks for reading my grumblings. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
short but sweet and to the point, ok maybe not sweet but you know what i mean...eor |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
Not sure I understand this either, but it provided for some spurring of the gray matter. Esclandre |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hehe, this is a neat little poem. It's almost mathematical in its description of a sort of recursive sequence of events, with each bit growing bigger. I think I'll be storing this little poetic/mathematical jem in my library. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I thank you. |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
very provocative...sour moods make for more than agreeable poetry! |
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