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Dark Poetry #3

See The Eyes Of God I See

WorrosLanrete
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since 2002-11-14

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0 posted 2002-11-14 07:30 PM

See the eyes of God I see

See the pain behind his eyes

See the tears well on his face

See him fall upon his knees

See the eyes of God I see

-JB

WorrosLanrete
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since 2002-11-14

Posts 45

1 posted 2002-11-17 12:37 PM

anyone? anyone?

Poet deVine

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2 posted 2002-11-17 02:43 PM

I think the forum is really quiet now. I like your work - not sure if it's really dark though. Keep writing...and reading!

WorrosLanrete
Junior Member

since 2002-11-14

Posts 45

3 posted 2002-11-26 02:02 PM

This poem works as a semi-followup to the To Whom Does He Pray poem.

Sort of sounds like something you could chant etc

Its a favorite of some of my RL friends

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