Failing to fall with the others.

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Dark Poetry #3

Failing to fall with the others.

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-02-08 01:54 PM

Am I still the one you thought to take away and make into a man? Am I compliant enough, or am I just too rough in the face? I displace your petty resolutions. your pollutions keep me wide awake at night. I wouldn't fight you if you swore to kill my dad because you know that I could do you good.
If this is how I feel,
And what you said was real,
Then this is what you want,
Then this is how I hunt.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-02-09 03:33 AM

I have never been able to write free form,I seem to be stuck with rhyme and meter.Your imagery is strong and I think I could write ten poems from the line "this is how I hunt" I liked this,but could not discern its meaning.

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