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Dark Poetry #3

iron flower

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-10 04:44 PM

from the seeds of hatred
the roots attached to the bodies of the tortured
bathed in sunlight
that watches the world with no sympathy
and fed by the blood-soaked soil...
grows the iron flower

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-02-12 01:27 PM

I love the imagery you used!

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

2 posted 2003-02-12 01:52 PM

Nice one Swan. Do you have any longer ones?

WisperWnd

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2003-02-12 03:29 PM

and fed by the blood-soaked soil...
grows the iron flower

especially love those last two lines.

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

4 posted 2003-02-13 09:40 PM

yes i do Whisper,they are in the open poetry forum

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-02-15 09:40 PM

Wow!Nice imagery,very nice write.Short and concise.
Jason

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-17 12:46 PM

You found dark beauty within your shadows. Wonderful painting you create with your words.

Beautiful.

Love,
Moca

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