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Tell me.

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-04-07 04:51 PM

Give me a good Idea.
For my brain is too weak for my own.
Every time I think something is good
it explodes in my brain and retards.
So I'm looking for somone to give me Ideas,
so I can be done playing cards.


   Sugest a subject, and I shall do my very best.


                              WisprWnd

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-04-08 10:53 AM

Hi WisperWnd, " for my brain is too weak for my own ". Very deep and can be metaphoric. This would be a good place to start. With this line you have already begun. Let your self receive the energies around you. Just make sure they are coming from the positive.

mysticpoe

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-08 01:28 PM

Well done!

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-04-08 01:36 PM

Interesting! Maybe you should look for your positive side and quit beating yourself up. Look inside and find the fine person you were born to be and write about that person.

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