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Dark Poetry #3
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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
0 posted 2003-05-06 02:00 PM

finding fault with
all you've done
how can you just
stand there like
it doesn't even matter
to you when it
tears you up inside
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-05-06 06:25 PM

hmmm are you finding fault with yourself...or is someone else finding fault with you...

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SCREAMIN
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 51
US, Tx
2 posted 2003-05-06 11:02 PM

either way; it's fault provoking! EXCELLENT!
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