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Still dreaming
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Still dreaming |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I sought pleasure in my leisure Coping with this world made me a hard breather, Insane I became when I took the chance, Forgetting many have failed in the past, Realizing the limit of my demise, I went all over feeling no surmise, Not regretting on what has occurred, Just knowing somehow all this will moor, Still dreaming of a wonderful time. My soul has lost all but its true shine. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Good use of rhyme. I find it difficult at times for myself. A good poem. *thanx*   |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
 good work, I like the style you've used, and a good poem.P.L.U.R. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
OoooOoo..I liked this. great post *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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