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Dark Poetry #3

Confusion

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2001-02-27 02:28 PM

Confusion

Solitude is bitter.
And yet I cannot be
One with those in revelry
With you apart from me.

Eagerly I seek the silence
That its solace may impart
New dreams to calm the spirit
And ease an aching heart.

But alone--ah, love--the pain is more--
My sorrow cries aloud,
And I haste from out the quiet
To mingle with the crowd!

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

1 posted 2001-02-27 03:03 PM

*applause* Simply wonderful!
What else can we do when love fades....
but carry on.
*thanx*

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-02-27 08:48 PM

Great work .Simply put, yet quite a jolt of emotion. Keep it up.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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