Vial of blood and tears - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #3

Vial of blood and tears

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-06-29 11:11 PM

Distastful doubts have drained me
from every open pore
poured my pain into a vial
and left my body sore

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-06-30 12:38 PM

your poem is good but it seems like its missing someting.

But i do like it

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

2 posted 2003-06-30 11:32 AM

i like it, but i guess you have to have been there to appreciate so i don't think too many people will get it

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.