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kwest
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since 2003-06-30
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0 posted 2003-06-30 01:29 AM


Forever.
Uncut.
Caught in a dream.
Kindling my enjoyment.

Yearning to wake.
Oblivion sinking in.
Universe gone.

Alive I am.
Life feeling good.
Life is forever.
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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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1 posted 2003-07-01 01:16 AM

Sometimes it seems like everyone has a stick in their rear, but your right, life is good
Wind
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2 posted 2003-07-01 10:23 AM

yeah, I thought it was strong, but other stuff it lacked. But I won't say anything because you don't encourage critiques

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-01-2003 10:24 AM).]
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