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Someone to Love |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Everybody needs somebody to call their own life isn't a complete journey when your'e traveling alone take the hand given, and let them love you like you need to be give yourself the peaceful feeling of loving someone else everybody needs somebody to call there own take a chance in life and experience the flight life without love is not complete so dont hesitate and turn your back a twist of fate is sure to come find your kindred spirit and run with them. make your world complete and dry your tears love is what you need I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- [This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Love is what i needed to complete my life....Glad i found my Kindred spirit*S* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Love is something we all need! A kindred spirit, can be a friend, mentor or lover. No matter how they come and what position they hold in your life, cherish them for the gift of understanding they have given you...everyday... Also fate is spelled fate *wink* isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
And there in the fist line should be spelled their. Ain't English grand. Lovely poem! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Jeremy Redinger Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46 |
I was in a play once called "Relationships and other Catastrophies" (you wont find it anywhere... it was written by students at my old highschool), and a line of the play stated this Person 1 - "Nicholas Cage was asked this question: 'What is more scary, Love or Anger?'" Person 2 - "Love by far" Person 1 - "That's what he said, he said it could do more damage. 'Anger passes quickly, love can be devistating...'" Person 2 - "So that proves my point, love leads to nothing but relationships and other catastrophies. It's a complete and utter waist of time." Person 1 - "Not exactly, he goes on and says '...But if is recieved in return, it can be a magnifying glass to everything that is beautiful in the world.'" I can find no greater truth. Well that is, as long as your listening to person 1  Wonderful poem Temptress. There is so much truth to your poem. It's sad that sometimes people give up on love. Thank you, truely... You've touched my heart, and dug up an old line from a play I haven't thought about in a few years. Thank you so much. Good luck to you on your future poetry. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I agree...all you need is love...James |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Thanks! for the replies*S* And the spelling corrections*giggles* Glad you enjoyed it I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
All you need is love... Love you T.M ~Broken~ Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
tempp- another wonderful and sweet poem. sometimes all you do need is love. i wish it was just always like that. "What the world needs now is love sweet love" sorry made me think of that stupid song i dont even know what it is called or who sang it. but any way i enjoyed this, thanks for sharing as always.  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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