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The Unexpected |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Another cheerful house caller connected to deliver knocks answered by the unexpected the door creaked open to an expressionless man who greeted her as she naively strode in and silently closed the door to the night outside A misathropic urge convulsed his aura ripped a thin vineer of civility yielded to darker,sinister urges.. then there followed the unexplained the missing bureau added another claim... A cheerful door visit gone awry a figure soon became self-possessed ruled by a stainless tool of choice yet their linen absorbed that crimson stain out, out rude blemish, he would cry to alter courses, so ruefully planned but his was the voice of the damned... Her spirit would rise from the bed she lay to haunt his living daylights till one day she sought to overturn an outcome of events but neither one nor the other could rest content... © Copyright 2003 Martin Dansky [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-10-2003 10:08 AM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Nice write. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin . . . this is brilliant . . . you created the entire scene for me relived it in my head through your words xxoo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I have to thank a horror film friend of mine who finally got me to put the 'dark' in words here, thanks all for sharing [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-12-2003 01:03 AM).] |
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