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Dark Poetry #3
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mkcbf
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since 2003-08-12
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0 posted 2003-08-12 07:13 AM

Death, stalking all his dreams
Horrible, awful, ugly dreams.
Stealing his mind thought, by thought
He should wake up it seems.


--It's short but I couldn't think of anything that could add more meaning to it.
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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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1 posted 2003-08-12 09:29 AM

I felt this way at times. One can convey ton's with just four lines and any more could be redundant. Enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.
Lexia
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since 2003-07-20
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2 posted 2003-08-12 10:17 AM

Very interesting. Short, to the point. Good write.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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3 posted 2003-08-12 10:40 AM

good write, wellcome to passions
mkcbf
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4 posted 2003-08-13 07:41 AM

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