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moon songs |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You faked the misery called passed down from moon songs of grey weltered and frayed with sweetness a cherry face with empty clouds longing for that comforting turn around trumpets asked one more time can I stay those medieval years the book believes their Moon shines with that distant taste those chocolate covered blinds If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
mmm, i like, seems a little different style than most, wonder why this had not gotten any attention...well i like it, well done poe... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not completely sure I understand this'n, but I loved the imagery and the way the language flowed. Intriguing.  |
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