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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Screams of pain render sanity nothing but the emptiness left Here i am left alone scared and frightened of what I don't know and don't understand life pushes me away death pulls me closer not my choice not my fault how do I break away from it all and spiral off into a nether place where fae and vampiric run side by side and leave me be letting me learn what I will and be what I so desire free free from humanity's restrainsts their do's and don't's crying softly in my sleep lost in inhuman humanity only want to get away |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh Alicia . . . you are not alone, as we all fight the restrictions of society and life Just to be free of pain would be a dream Just be sure you find that freedom here *smile* liked this write xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow does this ever remind me of my teen years. I know it's no fun, but it will get better.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
i liked it, you though have the same curse as me, you don't really find your rhythm until a couple of stanzas into it but once you do it really becomes something pretty good and that's in my opinion what happened here, the last 2 stanzas or so were really great, loved it, write on |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Great write, I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing this. ~Alicia |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Thanx for replying! I'm not sure why I write what I do sometimes. I don't always feel like what I write at that time. The words just pour forth and that's it. I write poetry all the time but almost all the poetry on here is not on paper. And my poetry on paper is not on here. I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable. |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Thanx for replying! I'm not sure why I write what I do sometimes. I don't always feel like what I write at that time. The words just pour forth and that's it. I write poetry all the time but almost all the poetry on here is not on paper. And my poetry on paper is not on here. I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable. |
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Mor-Estal Landis Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 10Luca, Ventoren |
Hey BP, nice piece work right here. I share the same feelings as all of ya'all on this, but I've quit trying to 'escape' the pain. Rather now, Is use it. And this may confuse you BP, becuz I know it looks like my life is at least some what good, what with my fairchild and all. but even though I've been here for 16 years...ya'all still scare me a bit...I'm rambling now, sorry. But yea nice work and be sure to post that ryming one for them all eh? Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star |
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