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Dark Poetry #3

colorless rainbow

ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

0 posted 2003-09-10 08:38 AM

All through the night, I hear the rain,
playing a musical show.
The dropping rain does make a promise,
a promise of a rainbow.

The rainbow signifies happy smiles,
that I will see today.
The rainbow colors dance around,
making smiles play.

On my face there is no smile,
only rain you can see on me.
This rain also makes a promise,
a rainbow that you never did see.

It doesn't make smiles play,
it only makes you cry.
A rainbow with such pain inside,
Cursed by the rains good-bye.

My tears have washed away the colors,
so the colors will never show.
This rainbow signifies how I feel,
the raindrops from this colorless rainbow.

Maddy vanD
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 99
Newfoundland, Canada

1 posted 2003-09-10 09:05 AM

A really nice image that, a rainbow with no colours, and a good metphor as well. All in all a good poem.

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-09-11 10:02 PM

ahhh. this is sad and cute at the same time. Wow...interesting thoughts, this was very creative. I got a little tongue tied..or something, at parts.
Nice.
~Lex

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-11-2003 10:02 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-12 02:11 AM

ahh Shannon, but here you are a spectrum!
nice job
xxoo

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