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Silence |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
Silence, Forever and ever Listen close Or you’ll miss….. That one moment where, I care You won’t listen Not even for a moment You never cared for anyone, But yourself Don’t even try to explain, I’m done listening So forget the silence It only lasted One moment meh its kinda old but i changed it around a little tell me what you think -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I like the direction here. 1st 5 lines started the read real nice. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
A bit ironic. I liked it, good job lance.  |
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