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Dark Poetry #3

Reliving the Past

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-19 01:06 AM

Surfacing of the old wounds,
Brings back the memories,

It was then that I chose-
To leave,

My reputation was stained,
However, I would survive,

Shunned by society,
Whom once I consider friends,

My mind set to exile,
Left behind is a desolated soul.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

1 posted 2001-04-27 05:51 PM

Amazing poem, very deep and meaningful. You sound very realted to the poem and I'm sure its very easy for other people to relate to too!! I know I did! You are an excellent poet! Just 1 thing, should "whom I once consider friends" be "Whom I once considerED to be friends? Maybe not I am sorry if you are offended or if it is deliberate!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2001-04-27 09:54 PM

I really enjoyed this. good write

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

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