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Phreak Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26 |
You know all my dreams You’ve made them reality You treat me like a goddess You’re all I need you to be. You think I am so beautiful My presence you adore So tell me what is wrong with me Why is it I can’t feel more? You want to take me places Overseas away with you… You shower me with kisses I want to love you, too. You are incredibly attractive You’re smart, you're funny, and strong You are gentle with my heart Someone tell me what is wrong. Is it my past that isn’t allowing me To feel the same way about you… Is it the wall I’ve spent years building That will not let you through? Help: I need these questions answered Because his heart I will not break Do I let him go and run away Or is it my past that I should forsake? What the hell is wrong with me Someone throw me a bone… If he was a jerk it would be much easier… Because jerks are all I’ve ever known. I can’t make my heart feel love I know I need to feel it now I want to give him all he gives me But I’m afraid I don’t know how. "I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB) [This message has been edited by Phreak (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Phreak Our heart it speaks so many words, but mainly truth inside, unless that feelings felt by both, the truth it can not hide. Be gentle but be truthful, be strong but still a friend, let your feelings true or false be told so that you don't pretend. We are all different, words of truth go further than actions of regret. Love is a road we must all seek and walk, to know its destiny. All the best. Rick |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this poem is my life-lol-I just lost the greatest guy i ever had on Friday the 13th(hmm) because of the same reasons in your poem--i never known some1 so great & i got all stupid & didnt know how to act or love him like he did-he knows all i've been through & he promises never to leave me completely, but we are gonna go our separate ways & just be friends--Anyway loved this  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think the answers are there, but only you can answer them. Take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
i find it hard to do the same things, and its my fault too |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I really cant think of any word except... WOW! Your wording was wonderful. I felt I was right there feeling your confusion with you. Great work, Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
Go with your "gut" it knows. Sometimes the most difficult things, are quite simple (under the crap of life), right? Good luck to you! |
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