Open Poetry #13 |
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Row Row Your Time |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana ![]() |
Joyless over your situation Above the earth I can see your temporary home Melting slowly Invaluable time Enclose in a silver fence monique |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is just sad to me......very well expressed ![]() [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You write such intriging poems..makes me want to know more about you. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Monique,...glad to get the chance to read you, I find this write so full,...and heavy. So privately somber. (If that makes sense). Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you do wonderfully with these short forms my friend . . . ![]() -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Monque, Hey you MISSED you Muches, I am thinking you have been busy of late, this is very thought provoking and could be applied to my life as well, enjoyed much, want to go dancing? ![]() Love, cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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