Open Poetry #13 |
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Seeds Of Thoughts (rictameter?) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
today i missed you once and then i missed you twice i was dreaming out the window spreading seeds of thoughts to reach your doorstep i wonder if you felt the breeze as i whispered to you from far away today -dgvarner 4-17-01 time makes us bolder..even children get older..and i'm gettin' older too... |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
i wonder if you felt the breeze as i whispered to you from far away BRAVO!!! Excellent, perfect and beautiful rictameter! Mike |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
dg, Ahhh, yes, and a nice gentle breeze it was too. Where been ya? Or...let's see...have I been missing...hmmmm? Well, anyway, nice to read you again. Kraw' Krawdad |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
hey sweets,,, yeah there was a big breeze.... was that you ![]() Very nice write I like alot. Parker |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
ohhh excellent rictameter too! I agree Bravo! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh yes! I do like this. "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yes! This is a perfect rictameter, perfect in sentiment and expression, you've done very well, I love it! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
excellent, I loved it!! AP |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ I really enjoyed this. Lovely treatment of the rictameter form ... beautiful thoughts in any form ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MIKE..thanks much for the BRAVO! ![]() KRAW..so good to see you..i've been here and there.. ![]() PARKER..it was me, love.. ![]() KOKO..many thanks for a second BRAVO..you people are way too kind..! ![]() EAGLE..i thank you friend.. ![]() MELISSA..thank you for PERFECT! ![]() AP..good to have you love it! ![]() MARGE..thank you for gracing my first rictameter! (i hope i did it right! just copied PARKERS! lol) glad you enjoyed it.. ![]() hugs, g time makes us bolder..even children get older..and i'm gettin' older too... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- well, lookie there at you stepping out into a different format... ![]() i like it MUCH! this is really cool.. ![]() you have to tell me the rules of this one.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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